Flora, Yolanda & Athena (Visual Perception & body Image)
*good use of cue cards
* does the idea of perception an better pay apply to grades and academics? Meaning, do teachers give more attractive people better grades?
* Timing was good in presentation
* Check out the golden ratio as it relates to the human body
* Check out
Dawn Loggins' story
* Is her story supported by your research findings?
* Careful when you explain cosmetic and/or plastic surgery changes to the body. Genetics is pre-determined and has a much broader impact on appearance.
8 well done overall.
Jeremy & Wynnie (justifiable homicide)
* careful when comparing Canadian and US legal systems
* consider good samaritan laws in both countries
* colour code graphs between boys and girls for clarity
* careful using a US case (Trayvon Martin) when discussing Canadian law
* good delivery and presentation
* balance size of graph with information in the key
* how does wartime play into this topic (WWI or WWII)
* avoid using wikipedia as a primary source
* good paraphrasing and not reading slides, facing the audience
Ashwin & Malcolm (fast food crackdown)
* great delivery
* good video clip
* nice comparison of costs, salt & sugar content and percentage of daily nutritional intake
* balance size of graph with information in the key
* "golden brown food" and product marketing
* Fast Food Nation book for your reference
* I didn't see a frequency table in your data
* good paraphrasing and not reading slides, facing the audience
Celina, Melanie, Simona (Teen Depression)
* good paraphrasing and not reading slides, facing the audience
* careful with language like bipolar (clarify when needed)
* balance size of graph with information in the key
* great intro with questions and facts around risk factors - it drew student attention to the topic
* great compare and contrast of the facts and figures
* good use of predictions with your survey results
* The Q&A at the end revealed good understanding of the topic
* Great choice of video clip
* Nice connection between depression, suicide and substance abuse
Jamie, Susan, Lucas (exercise)
* balance size of graph with information in the key
* lots of great info
* try to balance response to Q&A at the end
* reduce distracting animation by group members
* fun video clip but try to highlight the research findings in a slide after presentation
* good paraphrasing for the most part
Feedback Response - What is it?
As we discussed in class today, the last piece of this project is your feedback submission from your group. I would like you to prepare a response to the feedback that has been provided by classmates and me following each of your presentations. The purpose or goal in this feedback is for your group to demonstrate that you understand how you could improve on your presentation in the future. You need not respond to every question and comment but you should have an overall idea of the shortcomings of your work and share them in this submission. While you are not required to submit a feedback response, those received will be evaluated and will in no way reduce your mark for this unit. Please seek clarification from me as needed on this.