Tuesday, November 20, 2012

Feedback


Emika (NHL Lockout)

- excellent use of graphics
- great slide layout (3-4 points per slide)
- consistency and continuity between data slides
 - great delivery (spoke to audience and not at at them)
 - excellent reference list
-  well done.


Max & Brendan (Video Games)

- informative topic and content
 - careful - 7.38 hrs converted to time is not 7hrs 38 min
 - try not to say things like "we don't have" or "we didn't do" intro and conclusion slides or reference list
- good video clip
- try to share the speaking part equally
- careful with slide layout - try to balance info in the key so it is readable
- balance your slides and choices so that there a no "0" choices and reduce the number of bars on the chart with little or no data

Jonathan (Police corruption)

- good delivery (spoke to the group)
- interesting topic with lots of potential
- careful with slides (typos and balance of graph and key info)
- try to narrow topic to 1 element of police corruption
- careful with the "other" category. When it is too broad it can overshadow the results of your choices
- try to label your graphs (x and y axis) more accurately

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